COMMUNICATIVE PURPOSE: to theorize/speculate about:
-causes + /- effects
-particular meanings
-artist's choices
-possible developments, etc
Theorizing = performing an inferential type of mental activity (moving from particular items to general ideas), whose result is a thesis that must be supported by several points of proof
DISCOURSE STRATEGIES (that can be used when developing points of proof):
- explaining viewer's reactions
- formal analysis
- comparing works/artists/features
- historical/anecdotal narratives
- exemplification
- quoting/paraphrasing
- paradox, etc
STANDARD MOVE-STRUCTURE:
MOVE I: introducing the subject, thesis, list of points of proof
Step 1: Introducing the subject (title of work, artist, context of creation)
Step 2: stating the thesis: one complete, unified statement, limited to one aspect only, general enough to ask for support, defensible, not too obvious
Step 3: stating the points of proof (2-3) intended to be used in order to support the thesis
MOVE II: developing the points of proof
Step 1: developing the first point of proof
Step 2: developing the 2nd point of proof
Step 3: developing the 3rd point of proof
MOVE III: concluding by evaluating the measure in which the points of proof have demonstrated the thesis
MOVE IV: Works cited (whenever one uses bibliography)
Task 1. Comment on the way the theses and the points of proof were formulated and developed in the two texts we have read in class (1. The African Influences in Brancusi's Work by Paul Stoie and 2. Idea for Sale by Oana Boca). Which of them appears to you more convincing and why?
Task 2. Try to formulate a thesis and a list of points of proof on a subject of your choice.
Deadline: December 20
BRANCUSI
Newborn
The First Cry
The First Step
Cordos Vlad Nicolae, Grafica anul 2
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Paul Stoie's article "The African Influences in Brancusi's Work" is a well-written text.
His thesis statement is clear and concise, his points of proof are well-organized and supported
by evidence from credible sources. He provides specific examples and evidence to support
his claims. He also makes an effort to address potential counterarguments. Boca's article is a
well-written and informative piece of scholarship. Her thesis statement is complex and
nuanced and she supports her thesis with a variety of points of proof. From my point of view,
Paul Stoie’s text seems more convincing, since he argues that Brancusi's work shows a deep
understanding of African art and culture. He also provides evidence to support his claim that
Brancusi was influenced by African art long before it became popular among European
artists.
Task 2.
Street art is a powerful and legitimate form of artistic expression that challenges
conventional norms, fosters community engagement, and serves as a dynamic medium for
social and political commentary.
Also known as graffiti, it has cultural relevance, it involves community engagement
and it also represents a challenge of conventional art spaces.
Street art provides a platform for artists to express their cultural identity and convey
messages that resonate with local communities. The diversity of styles and themes in street
art reflects the richness and complexity of contemporary urban culture.
His type of art is inherently communal, often created in public spaces and accessible
to everyone. It encourages a sense of shared ownership of public spaces, fostering a stronger
connection between artists and their communities.
It challenges the exclusivity of traditional art institutions, democratizing art by bringing it to
the streets. It questions the idea that art should be confined to galleries and museums, making
it more accessible to a broader audience. Artists use public spaces as a canvas to voice
dissent, share perspectives, and provoke thought on critical societal issues. Street artists
employ a wide range of techniques and mediums, including stencils, murals, and installations,
showcasing the versatility and adaptability of this art form. The integration of unconventional
materials and methods challenges traditional artistic norms.
Street art often evolves rapidly, reflecting the dynamic nature of urban environments.
The spontaneity of street art contributes to its allure, capturing a moment in time and
allowing for continual artistic evolution.
Cordos Vlad Nicolae, Grafica anul 2
ReplyDeleteTask 1.
Paul Stoie's article "The African Influences in Brancusi's Work" is a well-written text.
His thesis statement is clear and concise, his points of proof are well-organized and supported
by evidence from credible sources. He provides specific examples and evidence to support
his claims. He also makes an effort to address potential counterarguments. Boca's article is a
well-written and informative piece of scholarship. Her thesis statement is complex and
nuanced and she supports her thesis with a variety of points of proof. From my point of view,
Paul Stoie’s text seems more convincing, since he argues that Brancusi's work shows a deep
understanding of African art and culture. He also provides evidence to support his claim that
Brancusi was influenced by African art long before it became popular among European
artists.
Cordos Vlad Nicolae, Grafica anul 2
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Street art is a powerful and legitimate form of artistic expression that challenges
conventional norms, fosters community engagement, and serves as a dynamic medium for
social and political commentary.
Also known as graffiti, it has cultural relevance, it involves community engagement
and it also represents a challenge of conventional art spaces.
Street art provides a platform for artists to express their cultural identity and convey
messages that resonate with local communities. The diversity of styles and themes in street
art reflects the richness and complexity of contemporary urban culture.
His type of art is inherently communal, often created in public spaces and accessible
to everyone. It encourages a sense of shared ownership of public spaces, fostering a stronger
connection between artists and their communities.
It challenges the exclusivity of traditional art institutions, democratizing art by bringing it to
the streets. It questions the idea that art should be confined to galleries and museums, making
it more accessible to a broader audience. Artists use public spaces as a canvas to voice
dissent, share perspectives, and provoke thought on critical societal issues. Street artists
employ a wide range of techniques and mediums, including stencils, murals, and installations,
showcasing the versatility and adaptability of this art form. The integration of unconventional
materials and methods challenges traditional artistic norms.
Street art often evolves rapidly, reflecting the dynamic nature of urban environments.
The spontaneity of street art contributes to its allure, capturing a moment in time and
allowing for continual artistic evolution.
Sebastian Crucianu Mdv
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I thoroughly enjoyed Stoie's writing.
The outlined essay plan appears to be well-structured and thought-out. It effectively introduces the topic, presents a clear thesis, and outlines specific points of proof to support the argument. The inclusion of examples, such as "The First Step" sculpture, adds concrete evidence to the discussion. Additionally, the essay addresses Brancusi's direct carving technique and the contrast between his usual elegant style and the darker, animalistic influences from African art. Boca's article impresses with its high-quality writing and scholarly depth. Her thesis statement demonstrates complexity and nuance, and she skillfully reinforces her argument by incorporating a variety of supporting points. This contributes to the overall richness and credibility of her scholarly work.
I prefer Stoie's article as well, because I feel like I would've written something similar had I had the opportunity.
Sebastian Crucianu Mdv
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Alexander McQueen revolutionized fashion, seamlessly blending avant-garde designs, meticulous craftsmanship, narrative-driven shows, technological innovation, and social commentary. His iconic Plato's Atlantis collection challenged norms, showcasing his commitment to pushing fashion boundaries. Meticulous detailing elevated his work to an art form, while immersive storytelling during runway shows added depth. Pioneering the use of technology, McQueen integrated holograms and 3D printing. Beyond aesthetics, his designs served as powerful social commentary on identity and societal issues. McQueen's enduring legacy transcends trends, making him a revolutionary force in contemporary fashion.
Lungu Andra, grafica, recontractare, tinand loc temelor de pe Classroom.
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In my opinion, the second thesis, “Idea for Sale” by Oana Boca is more convincing because it relates to today's world of movies and video games. It shows that designing isn't just about making things look good but also making them work well in a story or game. Feng Zsu's approach, as explained in the thesis, makes sense for today's audience who want not only visually appealing but also functional designs. It also highlights teamwork and collaboration, which is important in the creative industry. On the other hand, the first thesis about Brancusi's sculptures focuses on historical art influences, which while it is truly interesting, it still feels a bit more specialized and less directly connected to the practical demands of the present entertainment industry. So, in contrast with “Idea for Sale”, the thesis “The African Influences in Brancusi’s Work” by Paul Stoie, while skillfully exploring historical influences in art, it’s less applicable to the practical needs of today’s creative landscape that I am looking for.
Lungu Andra, grafica, recontractare, tinand loc temelor de pe Classroom.
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In my opinion, the second thesis, “Idea for Sale” by Oana Boca is more convincing because it relates to today's world of movies and video games. It shows that designing isn't just about making things look good but also making them work well in a story or game. Feng Zsu's approach, as explained in the thesis, makes sense for today's audience who want not only visually appealing but also functional designs. It also highlights teamwork and collaboration, which is important in the creative industry. On the other hand, the first thesis about Brancusi's sculptures focuses on historical art influences, which while it is truly interesting, it still feels a bit more specialized and less directly connected to the practical demands of the present entertainment industry. So, in contrast with “Idea for Sale”, the thesis “The African Influences in Brancusi’s Work” by Paul Stoie, while skillfully exploring historical influences in art, it’s less applicable to the practical needs of today’s creative landscape that I am looking for.
Lungu Andra, grafica, recontractare, tinand loc temelor de pe Classroom.
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Stating the thesis:
Incorporating cultural diversity into works of art is highly important. This exploration of cultural diversity in art not only celebrates individual identities but also fosters a meaningful dialogue between different traditions, perspectives, and narratives, being very helpful in spreading awareness, love and exchange.
List of points of proof:
Artists draw inspiration from various cultural elements, blending traditional and modern aesthetics to create visually striking and culturally diverse artworks. They challenge stereotypes and foster a more inclusive understanding of cultural heritage.
Point of proof 1:
Navigating the cultural boundaries with the stunning art of Yayoi Kusama: Through her art, Yayoi Kusama exemplifies how cultural diversity can be a powerful source of inspiration, contributing to a global artistic dialogue while maintaining a strong connection to her roots. Kusama's art exemplifies the harmony of cultural diversity, blending traditional Japanese aesthetics with avant-garde concepts to forge a distinctive artistic expression. As an example, one of the most famous works is her series of "Infinity Rooms," where viewers step into mirrored rooms filled with countless reflective objects, offering a life-changing experience and a new perspective.
Point of proof 2:
Kusama's fascination with repetition is deeply rooted in Japanese artistic traditions. By incorporating repetitive elements in her works, Kusama pays homage to the intricate patterns found in traditional Japanese textiles, ceramics, and religious art. Her use of repetition illustrates a broader appreciation between cultures.
Conclusion:
Cultural diversity in art is like a universal language that artists use to tell stories that resonate across borders. Exploring the work of artists like Yayoi Kusama, who blend their cultural roots with modern creativity, reveals how diversity in art enriches our understanding of the world.
Teodora Cocisiu, moda design vestimentar, licență 2
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Coco Chanel's innovative approach and revolutionary designs solidify her status as a genius in fashion, redefining the industry through her pioneering vision and enduring contribution.
Chanel's iconic creation of the little black dress revolutionized women's fashion, providing a timeless, versatile, and accessible garment that transcended trends. Her emphasis on comfort combined with elegance challenged the restrictive fashion norms of the time, introducing practical yet stylish clothing for women.
Her introduction of the Chanel suit, a blend of masculine and feminine elements, redefined women's fashion, offering a new sense of empowerment and liberation through attire.
Chanel's brand identity and marketing strategies, including the creation of the Chanel No. 5 perfume, solidified her as a pioneering figure in fashion, setting the benchmark for luxury and style that continues to influence the industry.
These points highlight Coco Chanel's groundbreaking contributions, showcasing her innovative designs, visionary approach, and enduring impact on the fashion world, solidifying her as a genius in fashion design.
Task 1
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion the work “The African Influences in Brancusi's Work” by Paul Stoie is more pleasant and convincing than “Idea for sale” by Oana Boca. The first essay is written fluently, supporting the developed topic, namely the African influences felt in Brancusi's works of art. Although this text is shorter in size, it is more coherent and comprehensible, having a story-like appearance, thus capturing my attention with more ease. The thesis proposed by Paul Stoie is more compact and has more essence when compared to that of Oana Boca, which is more ambiguous, more difficult to understand, requiring the reader to discern on their own both the thesis and the concept. when analysing the points of proof, I think they both did quite well, although I tend to appreciate Paul Stoie’s essay more. Oana Boca’s work is dense and full of information, however, the topic is not convincing, nor impressive. “The African Influences in Brancusi's Work” presents the points of proof in a more simplistic and comprehensible way. Moreover, it also has a more polished aspect, as it uses engaging vocabulary, while also suggesting emotion. These features made me see the essay as more convincing and appealing than “Idea for sale” by Oana Boca.
Task 2
Psychology is a field that supports artistic creation through perspectives much more grounded and developed in the affective universe of the artist.
I consider the need for a psychological vision in the creative act because art would acquire a depth of the artist's mind and not just of the concept itself. Thus, every controlled or chaotic manifestation proposes an inner universe that creates a complex vision of what can express an emotion or an intense feeling. The affective and the cognitive parts support an unbounded authenticity, which transmits high vibrations only through the existence of the work of art.
Moreover, the relationship between the creation, the artist and the viewer is metamorphosed, being full of power. The viewer can let himself be moved and identify the parts of affection that are also his activity. It can lead to an emotional shock or a simple soul caress. States of reverie or retraumatization can be triggered, leading to collective power and connection.
Tanase Giulia , Pictura ,Anul II
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In my opinion the work “The African Influences in Brancusi's Work” by Paul Stoie is more pleasant and convincing than “Idea for sale” by Oana Boca. The first essay is written fluently, supporting the developed topic, namely the African influences felt in Brancusi's works of art. Although this text is shorter in size, it is more coherent and comprehensible, having a story-like appearance, thus capturing my attention with more ease. The thesis proposed by Paul Stoie is more compact and has more essence when compared to that of Oana Boca, which is more ambiguous, more difficult to understand, requiring the reader to discern on their own both the thesis and the concept. when analysing the points of proof, I think they both did quite well, although I tend to appreciate Paul Stoie’s essay more. Oana Boca’s work is dense and full of information, however, the topic is not convincing, nor impressive. “The African Influences in Brancusi's Work” presents the points of proof in a more simplistic and comprehensible way. Moreover, it also has a more polished aspect, as it uses engaging vocabulary, while also suggesting emotion. These features made me see the essay as more convincing and appealing than “Idea for sale” by Oana Boca.
Task 2
Psychology is a field that supports artistic creation through perspectives much more grounded and developed in the affective universe of the artist.
I consider the need for a psychological vision in the creative act because art would acquire a depth of the artist's mind and not just of the concept itself. Thus, every controlled or chaotic manifestation proposes an inner universe that creates a complex vision of what can express an emotion or an intense feeling. The affective and the cognitive parts support an unbounded authenticity, which transmits high vibrations only through the existence of the work of art.
Moreover, the relationship between the creation, the artist and the viewer is metamorphosed, being full of power. The viewer can let himself be moved and identify the parts of affection that are also his activity. It can lead to an emotional shock or a simple soul caress. States of reverie or retraumatization can be triggered, leading to collective power and connection.
Șerban Irina, Design, Anul III, recuperare credite, în locul temelor de pe Classroom
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In my opinion, the way “The African Influences in Brancusi's Work” by Paul Stoie presented the theses and supporting points regarding Brancusi's engagement with African art is quite effective. The text provided a chronological and detailed exploration of his artistic evolution, from the early stages influenced by African art to the development of the direct carving technique and the inner conflict between his serene world and the "demonical forces" of tribal art. The inclusion of specific sculptures like "The First Step," "The First Cry," "The Newborn," and "The Beginning of the World" helps to anchor your points, providing concrete examples to support your claims. The integration of quotes from sources such as Foster, Hohl, and John Russel adds depth and credibility to the argument.
Furthermore, the acknowledgment of the dissonance between the African-inspired figures and Brancusi's overall pursuit of form and purity adds nuance to the discussion. By addressing the potential contradiction and emphasizing the darker, animalistic elements, you've presented a more holistic view of Brancusi's artistic journey.
Overall, the meticulous detailing of Brancusi's artistic process, the incorporation of diverse sources, and the nuanced exploration of conflicting elements contribute to the convincing nature of Paul Stoie's work.
Șerban Irina, Design, Anul III, recuperare credite, în locul temelor de pe Classroom
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In the contemporary art landscape, the commercialization of artistic efforts has profound implications for the essence and authenticity of creative expression. The increasing commodification of art fundamentally alters its nature and impact on both creators and audiences.
List of points of proof:
Three key points will be explored to substantiate this claim: the influence of market trends on artistic content, the impact on artistic integrity and originality, and the widening gap between artistic value and commercial success.
Point of proof 1:
The commercialization of art is evident in the palpable sway that market trends hold over the content of artistic creations. As galleries, collectors, and investors dictate preferences based on market demand, artists may find themselves compelled to align their work with prevailing tastes. This symbiotic relationship often sidelines unconventional or challenging artistic expressions in favor of commercially viable pieces. The pressure to conform to market expectations can inadvertently stifle innovation and risk-taking, leading to a homogenized artistic landscape.
Point of proof 2:
The commodification of art has a direct correlation with the erosion of artistic integrity and originality. As artists navigate the competitive art market, the temptation to create works solely for commercial success intensifies. This compromises the authenticity of artistic expression, as the pursuit of market appeal may supersede the artist's genuine creative vision. Consequently, the unique voice and perspective that art brings to societal discourse may be diluted, replaced by formulaic or pandering works designed for mass consumption.
Point of proof 3:
The commercialization of art widens the abyss between artistic value and commercial success. Art that resonates deeply on a cultural or intellectual level may struggle to find a market, while commercially-driven, aesthetically pleasing but superficial works gain widespread acclaim. This divergence reinforces a skewed perception of artistic merit, as success becomes increasingly equated with financial gain rather than intrinsic artistic worth. The resulting disconnect jeopardizes the long-term cultural impact of art and distorts the very purpose of creative expression.
In conclusion, the malleability of artistic content to market demands, the compromise of artistic integrity, and the widening gap between artistic value and commercial success collectively reinforce the thesis that the commercialization of art profoundly alters its essence. To preserve the authenticity and societal impact of art, a critical reevaluation of the prevailing commercial dynamics is imperative.
Pap Andrada, Foto Video, an III recuperare credite
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The visual harmony is seen in the perfect symmetry of the composition – that is, a central placement of the couple and balanced elements. This planned arrangement accentuates the significance of matrimonial ceremony and increases overall decorative quality. This careful balance adds depth of meaning to the depicted event, emphasizing its importance. There are warm, earthy colours dominating the scene in particular to emphasize a certain warmth and sense of domesticity especially when observing all those carpets and furnishings. The colour scheme adds to a sense of intimacy that would characterise an important, emotional event like a wedding. Van Eyck’s choice of colors further complement the overall mood and coherence between plot lines. Stoie has provided a well-organized argument by pointing out specific elements in Brancusi’s work that show the presence of African influences. He gives his arguments detailed analysis and provides examples that help readers understand the link between them. One of the strengths and perhaps even a persuasive power within Stoie’s argument is that she carefully looks into visual evidence which makes her exploration convincing in analyzing how African influences appear in Brancusi art. On the contrary, “Idea for Sale” by Oana Boca is a more conceptual piece as it talks about commodification of ideas in contemporary art world. Even though Boca provides intriguing observations and brings attention to the commodification of art, her argument depends more on theoretical musings than specific cases or in-depth analysis. Personally, I find Stoie’s essay about the African roots seen in Brancusi more persuasive because it is backed by enough proof and detailed analysis. This is because the in-depth analysis of particular artworks offers a concrete basis for the claim, making it more convincing and supported by facts that can be seen.
Task 2
20th-century ArtSince the 19 th century, there was a sudden surge towards technology and globalisation that immensely transformed different areas of life including contemporary art in terms of its forms themes and modes. Points of Proof: Digital Transformation: The digitalisation of technology has changed the creation and presentation of art, as artists use these new instruments available in a virtual space and also leverage equipment such as augmented reality to pave away for traditional forms that were never thought possible. Globalization and Cultural Exchange: Contemporary Art is becoming a mirror reflection to the more and more interglobalized world with artists trying to grasp inspiration from various cultures and points of view. It is through this globalization that we find an even richer and much broader tapestry of art forms, artistic expression far more transcending the rigid boundaries of geography. Democratization of Art: Compared to such traditional methods, online platforms and social media have democartized art in the sense that artists can share their work with global audiences without going through the usual processes associated with getting accepted by gallery systems. At the same time, this shift undermines traditional hierarchy by giving way for new talents.
Mahu Ioana Maria Foto Video II recuperare credite
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After reading both texts, I can say that I liked more the article written by Paul Stoie about Brancusi's art and how he was influenced by Africa. I think it is written in such a way that it can be understood by anyone, and it manages to argue very clearly all the points of view on the subject in relation to the influence of African arts in Brancusi's work. He also comes up with clear examples that make you want to read more about his subject. Simple is best! But that's just my opinion.
Also, the text that belongs to Oana Boca, "Idea for sale" is also very well written, it contains a lot of information. She has a very developed vocabulary and also gives plenty of examples but not enough to attract me particularly. Probably also because I like more the subject treated by Paul.
Task 2
New Media Art is a recent and continuously developing way of expression through art, an art that combines multiple ways of expression, including music, photography, painting or sensory experiences.
New Media can be a fun way to encourage children to explore their creativity and develop their communication skills
A first point of view is the fact that this kind of art does not limit you to create, and children can learn that they can make artistic creations out of nothing. For example, a simple play with the shadows of our hands on a wall also colored by them, accompanied by suitable music, can create a real show.
A second point is the fact that you can be original, quite easily, due to the fact that it is such a complex field. There is not much chance to make a mistake with this way of expression.
My opinion is that New Media Art should be studied more, because it is much more anchored in the present, and the professors at my college made me really love it